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[Nguyễn Bảo Long]

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Writing Competition : YOUR BEST FRIEND

-Write 70 – 100 words about your best friend.

 ( Đề bài trên SBT TA Lớp 6 { Trang 21 }

Lưu ý : Đây chỉ là đề bài , không phải là một kì thi thật.

My best friend is Thanh An. We came to a same Archimedes School, and we have been friend for 1 year. Thanh An is not short and not tall , he has a normally height. He had a short black hair and a big black eyes. He is very kind and smart, especially at Math. He is funny too, he makes me laugh even when I feel bad. I like to being friend with him. Because he is very smart at Math, so we created a Zalo group to do our homework. I will talk for you my secret: I sometime copy his Math homework too (HAHAHA).  I hope that I can being friend with him forever.

Answer 1

[🐟 ⋆ 🐇 🎀 𝒩𝑔𝓊𝓎ễ𝓃 Đă𝓃𝑔 𝒩𝒽â𝓃 🎀 🐇 ⋆ 🐟]

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My best friend is Thanh An. We came to the same Archimedes School, and we have been friends for 1 year. Thanh An is not short and not tall, he has a normal height. He had a short black hair and a big black eyes. He is very kind and smart, especially in Math. He is funny too, he makes me laugh even when I feel bad. I like to be friends with him. Because he is very smart at Math, we created a Zalo group to do our homework. I will tell you my secret: I sometimes copy his Math homework too (HAHAHA). I hope that I can be friends with him forever.