Mọi người xem và sửa lỗi giúp mình với ạ (sắp thi nói rồi hic...)My favorite sport is badminton. I started playing this sport when I was 12 years old. I often play badminton at school or on the yard at home. I play with my friends or relatives in my free time. I really like badminton because it is fun and exciting , it helps me healthy and relaxing after the stressful school hours. That's why, I choose badminton as one of my hobbies. In short, playing badminton benefits a...
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Mọi người xem và sửa lỗi giúp mình với ạ (sắp thi nói rồi hic...)
My favorite sport is badminton. I started playing this sport when I was 12 years old. I often play badminton at school or on the yard at home. I play with my friends or relatives in my free time. I really like badminton because it is fun and exciting , it helps me healthy and relaxing after the stressful school hours. That's why, I choose badminton as one of my hobbies. In short, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but mentally as well.
My favorite sport is badminton. I started playing this sport when I was 12 years old. I often play badminton at school or on => in the yard at home. I play with my friends or relatives in my free time. I really like badminton because it is fun and exciting , it makes me healthy and relaxing after the stressful school hours. That's why I choose badminton as one of my hobbies. In short, playing badminton benefits a person not only physically but mentally as well.
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