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vào đầu ngày cuối cùng của kỳ nghỉ, chúng tôi sẽ đến thác nước Poungour. nước rơi từ độ cao gần 40 mét, trải rộng hơn 100 mét, phá vỡ hệ thống cầu thang đá 7 tầng. được bao quanh bởi một khu rừng nguyên sinh với diện tích khoảng 2,5 ha với thảm thực vật phong phú và đa dạng. nhiệt độ trung bình là từ 14 đến 23 độ C. vào buổi tối chúng tôi sẽ đến thăm người thân của chúng tôi. sáng mai sẽ quay lại Tôi rất hào hứng về kỳ nghỉ sắp tới, hy vọng kỳ nghỉ sẽ như tôi phấn khích.
The next vacation I'm going to with my family is in Da Lat. Da Lat is called the land of fog, this tour last 2 days. I have planned what will we do in our 2-day vacation. On the first day, I'm going to go for a walk around the hotel that I rented, after that, me and my sister are going to eat food that we . Me and my family will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, glass and flower. We will go to the supermarket to buy some special food, tea, coffee, souvenirs or go shoping and many other interesting activities. Early in the morning on the last day of our vacation, we are going to the Poungour waterfall. The water falls from the height about 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, through a 7 storey stone stair system surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. The average temparature in Da Lat is from 14 to 23 degrees celsius. In the evening, we'll visit our relative and we'll leave in the morning of the following day. I'm very excited about the up coming vacation. I hope the vacation will be as I expected. ( Bạn nên chú ý về thì tương lai, bạn viết là Will + be + V_ing nhưng thực ra là Will + V_Infinitive hoặc Be ( are, is, am ) + going to do smt )
On my next vacation, I'm going to Da Lat with my family. Da Lat is called the land of fog. The tour will last 2 days. Our 2-day vacation plan is as followed. On the first day, I'll go for a walk around the hotel that I rented. My sister and I will enjoy all the food we love. My family and I will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, grass, and flower. Then, we will go to the supermarket to buy some special food, tea, coffee, souvenir or go shopping and enjoy many other interesting activities. Early morning on the last day of vacation, we will go to the Poungour waterfall. The waterfall has a height of nearly 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, through a 7-story stone stair system. It's surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. The average temperature there ranging from 14 to 23 degrees celsius. In the evening, we'll visit our relatives. We'll be back the morning after. I'm excited about the upcoming vacation. Hopefully, the vacation will be as excited as I expected.
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The next vacation I'm giong to Da Lat with my family. Da Lat is called the land of fog. The tour will last 2 days. Our 2 day vacation plan are: The frist day, I'll go for a walk around the hotel that I rented. I and my sister will eat the food we . I and my family will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, glass and flower. We will go to the super market buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenir or going shopping and many other interesting activities. Early in the moring on the last day of vacation, we will go to the Poungour waterfall. Water falls from a height of nearly 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, throght a 7-storey stone stair system. surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. The average temparature is from 14 to 23 degree celsius. In the evening we'll visit our relative. We'll be back tomorrow morning. I'm excited about the up coming vacation, hopefully the vacation will be as I excited.
Chú thích:
Gạch ngang: Bỏ
Gạch chân: Lỗi
Chữa lỗi:
2 day vacation --> two-day vacation
are --> is
frist --> first
We will go to the super market buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenir or going shopping and many other interesting activities. --> We will go to the super market to buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenirs or going shopping and many other interesting activities.
hopefully the vacation will be as I excited. --> hopefully the vacation will be as exciting as I expected.
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In Hanoi and North Vietnamese plains, it will be quite cold and foggy. The temperature will be from 14 to 20-degree centigrade. You should wear a coat and turn on the motorbike's light when going out. Don't forget to warm the elderly people and the children.
The provinces from Thanh Hoa to Binh Dinh as Nghe An, Ha Tinh and Quan Binh, the weather will be cloudy and wet. Somewhere can be rainy. The low will be 23 and the high will be 30-degree centigrade. When you need to go out, you should bring umbrella or raincoat.
In plateau area in central Vietnam, the weather will be very nice. It will be cool and windy a whole day. The low will be 15 and the high will be 20-degree centigrade. This will be a wonderful time to go for a picnic. Hope you will have a happy time with your family and your friends.
With the South, daytime will be sunny and baking hot, the night will be rainy and cold. The low will be 12 and the high will be 40 degree centigrade. With this kind of weather, the children and the elderly people will be sick easily, so you must take care of them carefully.
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In Hanoi and North Vietnamese plains, it will be quite cold and foggy. The temperature will be from 14 to 20 degree centigrade. You should wear coat and turn on the motorbike's light when go out. Don't forget to warm the elderly people and the children.
The provinces from Thanh Hoa to Binh Dinh as Nghe An, Ha Tinh and Quang Binh, the weather will be cloudy and wet. Somewhere can be rainy. The low will be 23 and the high will be 30 degree centigrade. When you need go out, you should bring umbrella or raincoat.
In plateau area in central Vietnam, the weather will be very nice. It will be cool and windy a whole day. The low will be 15 and the high will be 20 degree centigrade. This will be a wonderful time to go for a picnic. Hope you will have a happy time with your family and your friends.
With the South, daytime will be sunny and baking hot, the night will be rainy and cold. The low will be 12 and the high will be 40 degree centigrade. With this kind of weather, the children and the elderly people will be sick easily, so you must take care of them carefully.
Chưa chắc đúng.Chỗ in đậm là chỗ đã dc sửa lại
VI Read the following passage and answer each of the question below. ( 10 points )
We speak about the weather almost everyday. Before we begin doing something we want to know what kind of weather it is going to be.
Why do we speak about the weather so often? The answer is not difficult. We want sunny weather when we go for a walk in the country, and on a rainy day we stay at home reading books, watching TV or doing other things.
When we are at the seaside, windy weather is not pleasant . It is difficult to swim when the wind blows. And the wind can change good weather into bad one. The sun will stop shinning, and the rain may come.
And is there anything which we can do and must do in any weather? Yes, of coure there is. As English people say*rain or shine we must go to school.*.School is good in any weather, isn’t it?
It is obviously important for a farmer, a fisherman, an airplanr pilot, and a hip’s captain to know what the weather will be like. Unless they know what weather to expect , they cannot make their plans.
1 How often do we speak about the weather?
ALMOST EVERYDAY.
2 What do we usually do on a rainy day?
we stay at home reading books, watching TV or doing other things.
3 What is wrong with us when we are at the seasidde on a windy day?
It is difficult to swim when the wind blows.
4 According to the writer, what thing can we do and must we do in any weather?
WE MUST GO TO SCHOOL.
5 Why is it important for us to know what kind of weather it is going to be?
Because unless they know what weather to expect , they cannot make their plans.
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