cần sửa chỗ nào?Hello,I am Hieu. Now, I want introduce of my family. My family hasfour people, including my Dad, my Mom, Brother and Me. MyDad is tall, the hairs are black and short. He is a teacher. MyMom is 34 years old, she has a long hairs and black too. Mybrother is like playing soccer and me too, my Brother isshort, he is seven years old and he is a pupil in Ky Thinh 1primary school. Oh, it is 21:07, it is time for bed, good nightmy family, good night my friends, see you...
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cần sửa chỗ nào?
Hello,I am Hieu. Now, I want introduce of my family. My family has
four people, including my Dad, my Mom, Brother and Me. My
Dad is tall, the hairs are black and short. He is a teacher. My
Mom is 34 years old, she has a long hairs and black too. My
brother is like playing soccer and me too, my Brother is
short, he is seven years old and he is a pupil in Ky Thinh 1
primary school. Oh, it is 21:07, it is time for bed, good night
my family, good night my friends, see you later.
want introduce --> want to introduce
hairs are --> hair is
a long hairs and black too ---> a long black hair.
is ---> s
time for bed ---> sleeping time
Ngoài ra còn một số lỗi về dấu câu thì bạn tự sửa nhé.
1. Want introduce of ->will introduce about
2. the hairs are black and short -> his hair is black and short
3. she has a long hair -> she has long hair
4. my brother is playing soccer -> my brother s playing soccer
Note: Bạn ơi, '' hair'' là danh từ không đếm được nên không thêm đuôi ''s'' và nhớ sử dụng với dạng số ít.