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23 tháng 10 2019

Tham khảo:

Villages are a beauty and today's generation is really missing the beauty of villages. Villages are so silent and calm and pollution free. Though I live in a city with the maddening crowd and sound, my parents used to live in villages and I have been there many times.Both my parents come from villages, and I look forward to go their places during my vacations. It is so calm and peaceful and the beauty of nature is just fantastic. With not many families around, they know each other so well, that they all almost live like a large family. You could step into your neighbor’s house at any time and you would be welcomed with yummy dishes and snacks. Though the transportation has advanced, there are still places where you need to walk.I remember, while visiting my grandmother’s place, we had to walk through the paddy fields to reach her home!! It was such an experience that I guess very few, who are of my age would have had The backwaters are another beauty to the villages. You have small streams that club to the lakes and backwaters. This stream water is so fresh and crystal clear. You could walk through them and the cool water just rushes over your feet and makes you feel so cool. Hours could be spent by simply sitting and admiring the beauty of nature.The sunset is a beautiful scene to be viewed.

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3 tháng 11 2020

Bài của em về nội dung hợp lý, sử dụng nhiều từ vựng hay. Nhưng có một điểm em cần lưu ý đó là từ "villages". Khi em dùng dạng thức số nhiều của từ này thì em phải chú ý đến việc chia động từ to be ở đằng sau nhé (câu đầu tiên).

Tiếp theo ở dòng số 4 có cụm "my parents come from villages". Có 2 lỗi sai ở câu này. Đầu tiên, đó vẫn là từ "villages". Bố mẹ tôi cũng đều xuất thân từ làng quê thì village phải có "the" vì đó đã xác định rồi. Thứ hai đó là em đã chia sai thì của động từ "come" rồi, câu này đang nói về sự việc xảy ra trong quá khứ nên phải dùng là "came". Câu của em có thể sửa lại là "My parents came from the village/countryside"

Cũng ở dòng đó và có cụm "look forward to come their place", thiếu giới từ "to" em nhé!

Dòng số 12 có câu em dùng "streams" và câu sau em lại dùng là "this stream", em nên dùng đồng nhất dạng thức của từ nhé. Có thể em dùng ở câu trước là "a stream" thì câu sau em có thể dùng this stream. Hoặc là nếu câu trước em để streams thì câu sau em nên để "these streams" và chia động từ to be thành "are" nhé!

Anyway, ý tưởng của em tốt, từ vựng tốt. Goodluck!

14 tháng 12 2018

THAM KHẢO

1.

Nowadays, the society is more and more developmental. The Internet becomes useful and popular with everyone. But as we know, everything has two-side: advantages and disadvantages.
We can not deny that Internet has many advantages. It helps us to get more information faster. In addition, we can relax by Internet after a hard-working day such as: listening to online music, watching movies, playing games...Toward the students and even people who have job, they can study in the Internet. It's really convenient for us to do everything easier.
Beside the benefit of the Internet, there are some restrictions. For example: These days, in the world, there are many situations that the students use Internet too much and distracted in learning. Moreover, using Internet for a long time might causes harmfulness for your health. And sometimes, we could get virus while using the Internet. It's very dangerous.
However, Internet is really useful and necessary for our life.

2.

The Internet plays an important role in our modern life. However, every coin has two sides and we can find out pros and cons of the internet by my following provement.

The Internet is a breakthrough in developing technology. It brings us wonderful advantages. First, education is more and more improved due to appearance of the internet. Students can learn and look for basic knowledge online without spending too much time in the libarary. This leads to the fact that it is very convenient for both teachers and students to broaden their perception. Second, the internet shorten the distance of people even though they are very far from each other. Skype or Yahoo are good ways for them to contact and have fun. It is true to say that distance is not a big problem in such a developing technology world. Third, the internet makes everything easier and faster. For example, we can send or receive documentary through email for a short time wwhile 10 years ago, we need to wait foe 3 or 4 days to send to a far distence.

On the other hand, the internet also has drawbacks. People especially teenager are easily involved in computer games. They take so much time to sit in front of the screen to play games. This doesn't only affect to their health but it also decrease the amount of money which their parents earn by hard works. They can't understand that money doesn't grow on tree. Moreover, the internet prevents them from taking part in outdoor activities beacause of the internet's attraction. This will slowdown socal skills and cause their inconfidence .

In a word, the inetrnet is one of the most wonderful inventions in the world. However, it also causes trobles in our life. Thus, we should use it in moderate

The world is developing day by day, and one of its biggest invention is the Internet. The first adventage of the Internet is that it changed our life style. While in the past, people had to go to the supermarket to buy what they wanted or they had to visit the park for entertainment, now we only need to stay at home with a phone connected to Internet, we can easily buy anything or can relax with video games. However, it is also a disadvantage. Some people spend too much time on it, this can do harm to our health and our eyes. Therefore, although the Internet is usefor for us but we should spend little time surfing it.

14 tháng 10 2017

Bài tham khảo 2:

Life in the countryside is quite different from that in the city. First, it is the atmosphere that differentiates the two living environments. In the countryside, the air and water are much fresher and safer, thus living there is totally comfortable and beneficial for our health. In contrast, people who live in big cities suffer from health problems and diseases related to poor air quality and sources of polluted water. Second, prices and costs of living are cheaper in the countryside than in big cities. Vegetables, fruits and meats are home-grown and home-produced. However, in cities, people have to go shopping for them. Third, the interpersional relationships are more harmonious and friendlier. Those who live in the same village, especially neighbours, for example, know each other very well. There is a close-knit cooperation between people in working and many other daily activities. On the contrary, negatively speaking, city people only live and know their own business. They hardly care about who their neighbours are and what they do. Sending a helping hand, as a result, is never seen among city people. In conclusion, although the city life holds many advantages that make life more convenient, I always prefer living in the countryside where the environment is nice, the costs of living is affordable, and the intimate relationships among people are really meaningful. Personally, If I had a choice between a villa in the city and a small house with garden surrounding, the latter would seem better to me.

17 tháng 10 2017

I like country life. Because people in the countryside are more friendly than those who live in city.

In the countryside, the enviroment is very fresh and it have many trees. My mind is better: not busy, peaceful.

Many people say that: " the country life is very boring!" but I don't think so. I think although the countryside doesn't have many means of the entertainment but we can play traditionnal games.

In the city, people always want to work and work, they want to have much money. So, sometimes they forget many interesting things in their life.

But in the countryside, you can become another one : you are better, happier anh care of everybody. Here, people are a big family, if you are sad, they are sad with you. If you smile, they also smile with you.

Only thing I want to say " I love country life forever"
Dịch:

Tôi thích cuộc sống ở nông thôn. Bởi vì người dân ở nông thôn thân thiện hơn những người ở thành phố.

Ở nông thôn, môi trường rất sạch sẽ và có nhiều cây cối. Điều này tôi nghĩ là tốt hơn: không bận rộn và yên bình.

Nhiều người nói rằng: "cuộc sống ở nông thôn rất chán!" nhưng tôi không nghĩ thế. Tôi nghĩ rằng mặc dù nông thôn không có nhiều phương tiện giải trí nhưng chúng tôi có thể chơi các trò chơi truyền thống.

Trong thành phố, mọi người luôn muốn làm việc và làm việc, họ muốn có nhiều tiền. Vì vậy, đôi khi họ quên đi nhiều điều thú vị trong cuộc sống của họ.

Nhưng ở nông thôn, bạn có thể trở thành một người: bạn tốt hơn, hạnh phúc hơn và được quan tâm bởi tất cả mọi người. Ở đây, mọi người là một gia đình lớn, nếu bạn buồn, họ buồn với bạn. Nếu bạn mỉm cười, họ cũng mỉm cười với bạn.

Điều duy nhất mà tôi muốn nói "Tôi yêu cuộc sống nông thôn mãi mãi"

10 tháng 9 2017

Hello. My name is Thuy an. Let me introduce myself and my family. I'm 18 years old this year, a student of Đông Đô University. Taking a walk and going out with friends are my hobbies. I am living in Hanoi, but was born and raised (grew up) in Son La Province. My family has 5 people: my father, mother, older sister, younger sister and me. My father names Tuan, he is 50 years old and he is an engineer. My mother names Thuan, she's 51 years old, and working as a doctor. My older sister names Thuy, she is 23 years old and she is a singer, she feels happy when singing. Finally, my younger sister, she's 9 years old and studying at Quyết Thắng Elementary School. She studies very hard and she is one of the best pupil in her class. On the fine day and with free time, my family often goes out for camping outdoors, it's very meaningful and fun. I feel very happy to be alive in this family.
I love my family so much. I will try to learn and work well to take care of my family. I hope that my family is always happy and has the best things.
Thank you for listening to my thoughts.
Wishing you a happy day.

10 tháng 9 2017

Hello. My name is and Commerce, I would like to introduce myself and my family. This year I am 18 years old, are students of private universities that line. My hobbies are walking and eating with friends. I'm living in Hanoi, but born and raised in Son La. My family has 5 people: father, mother, sister and sister and me. My father named Tuan, he was 50 years old and engineers. My mother named Thuan, 51, and her doctor is doing. My sister named Thuy, she is 23 and she is a singer, she feels happy when singing. Lastly, my sister, her 9-year-old elementary school Wins Decision. She studied hard and irrepressible. On fine days, have free time I organize family outdoor camping, it is very meaningful and fun. I feel very happy to be living in this household.
I love my family so much. I will try to learn and do well to help my family. I wish my family was always happy and have the very best
Thank you for listening to my thoughts.
Have a nice day

4 tháng 2 2018

Fresh water is the most important source of life on the earth. Any living thing may survive without food for days however it is impossible to imagine life without water and oxygen. The ever increasing human population enhances the demand of more water for purposes like drinking, washing, performing industrial processes, irrigating crops, arranging swimming pools and other water-sports centres. Water pollution is done by the people of all over the world because of increasing demands and competitions of luxuries life. Waste products from many human activities are spoiling the whole water and decreasing the amount of oxygen available in the water. Such pollutants are altering the physical, chemical, thermal, and biological characteristics of the water and adversely affecting the lives inside as well as outside the water.

When we drink the polluted water, harmful chemicals and other pollutants goes inside our body and deteriorates all the body organs functioning and puts our lives in danger. Such harmful chemicals also disturb the lives of animals and plants greatly. When plants absorb dirty water through their roots, they stop growing and die. Thousands of seabirds are killing because of the oil spilling from ships and industries. High level of water pollution is done due to the chemicals coming out of the agricultural usage of fertilizers, insecticides and pesticides. The effect of water pollution varies from place to place upon the type and amount of water contamination. The degradation of drinking water needs an urgent basis prevention method which is possible by the proper understanding and support from the end of each and every person living on the earth.

16 tháng 4 2017

Every company should invest in our environment. We live in a time when the environment is in danger, so it is important to protect it. We need a healthy environment in order to survive, so we must protect it. We need to protect the environment now to help prevent health problems, to maintain the ecosystem, and to preserve the Earth for our children.

Pollution from factories and cars can cause damage to the environment. It makes the air dirty. Breathing this dirty air causes health problems, particularly for children and the elderly. Pollution not only increases spending on health care, but also decreases working ability. We need to control the amounts of pollution we produce in order to prevent health problems.

We also need to pay attention to the ecosystem. Plant life, animal life, and people all depend on each other. An unhealthy environment disturbs this ecosystem. For example, changes in the environments might cause a certain kind of plant to die. If that plant is food for a certain kind of animal, the animal will die too. If people use that animal as food source, there could be big problem. To avoid the big problems, factories should pollute as little as possible and use natural resources rationally.

If we do not protect our environment it will continue to get worse and our children will suffer the consequences. The air and water will be dirtier, natural resources will become scarcer, and more plants and animals will die. Our children won’t have as much natural beauty to admire. Even worse, their well-being will be threatened.

Without clean air to breathe, a healthy ecosystem, and a future for our children, the human race will not survive. That is why protecting our environment is important. If we have a healthy environment not only the company is going to make a profit but also workers, customers and community.

21 tháng 12 2017

Health is important with all people in the world. People say that "Health is all". Health is wealth and we must agree that good health gives us to control our own lives. If you sick, you won't be able to do any work at all. Good health helps us have a complete happiness. Health is as important as life.
There are many to keep us healthy. First, we should do exercise everyday. We can walk on the street, do aerobics and so on. Second, we should go to the hospital to get a general check-up so that we can have information about our health. Third, we should have a health insurance too. Moreover, we should eat a balanced diet and adequate nutrition. In addition, we should wear warm clothes in cold weather to avoid affecting our health.
Depending on the purpose of life that people find the most important thing in their life. In my opinion, health is really the most important thing in our life and we need to have suitable ways to keep us healthy.

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