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Mn sửa giup mình ngữ pháp bài này xem chỗ nào còn sai ko nhé, mai mình kt rồi:
1. I have many hobbies, but i love listening to music the most, especially English songs. My hobbies started when i was at fourth grade. I really love this hobby because it makes me feel relaxed and i can also learn English vocabulary when listening to English songs. I spend much time on it. I can listen when i'm doing my housework or when i'm sleeping. I love Camila Cabello, Selena Gomez,... they are great singers. I think this is a good hobby and i'll never quit it.

2. There are many delicious dishes in Viet Nam and Banh Mi is the one i like the most. It's a very popular street food in Viet Nam and it very tasty. It's has a lot of taste but the one with fried egg, cucumbers and tomatos is my most favourite. To make this dish, you'll need a loaf of bread, 2 eggs, a half of a cucumber, 1 tomato, a pinch of salt and chili sauce. First, beat the eggs together with salt, then fry that mixture in a pan. Next, cut the cucumber and tomato into thin slices. Then, add the fried egg, cucumber and tomato into the bread. After that, server it with some chili sauce if you like. Finally, enjoy! This dish is really easy to make so i always make it by myself. I often have this dish for my breakfast because it contains a lots of calories. I really love this dish

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1. I have many hobbies, but i love listening to music the most, especially English songs. My hobbies started (cái này nghe hơi kì, theo mình nên viết là i started my hobby)when i was at->in fourth grade. I really love this hobby->it because it makes me feel relaxed and i can also learn English vocabulary when listening to English songs. I spend much time on it. I can listen when i'm doing my housework or when i'm sleeping. I love Camila Cabello, Selena Gomez,... they are great singers. I think this is a good hobby and i'll never quit it.

2. There are many delicious dishes in Viet Nam and Banh Mi is the one i like the most->one of them i like banh mi most. It's a very popular street food in Viet Nam and it is very tasty. It's->it has a lot of taste but the one with fried egg, cucumbers and tomatos->tomatoes is my most favourite->favorite food. To make this dish, you'll need a loaf of bread, 2 eggs, a half of a cucumber, 1 tomato, a pinch of salt and chili sauce. First->firstly, beat the eggs together with salt, then fry that mixture in a pan. Next, cut the cucumber and tomato into thin slices. Then, add the fried egg, cucumber and tomato into the bread. After that, server it with some chili sauce if you like. Finally, enjoy! This dish is really easy to make so i always make it by myself. I often have this dish for my breakfast because it contains a lots->lots of calories. I really love this dish