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Dear Dean,
How are you? Thank you for your wonderful gift. I think you got an enjoyable summer holiday. And I would like to tell you about my last summer holiday.
I spent my summer holiday with my family in Da Nang for 3 days. That was really great days for me. On the first day, we had a trip to Ba Na Hills. The atmosphere was very fresh, it made me feel good. We visited many places such as Fantasy Park, Debay Cellar, French Village, etc.
On the second day, we went to visit My Son Sanctuary and go swimming in the afternoon. Da Nang beach is very pure and the scene is really beautiful. So I took many nice pictures.
And on the last day, we just walked around the town, enjoy some delicious dishes of Da Nang such as bun Quang, banh trang thit heo, etc and bought some souvenirs. I have a great gift for you. I will send your gift and the beautiful pictures that I took for you.
I really had a great time with my family. Da Nang is a wonderful place and people in here are friendly. I think this is a place I shall never forget. So how is your summer vacation? Write to me and tell me about it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Trang
Dear Dean,
How are you? Thank you for your wonderful gift. I think you got an enjoyable summer holiday. And I would like to tell you about my last summer holiday.
I spent my summer holiday with my family in Da Nang for 3 days. That was really great days for me. On the first day, we had a trip to Ba Na Hills. The atmosphere was very fresh, it made me feel good. We visited many places such as Fantasy Park, Debay Cellar, French Village, etc.
On the second day, we went to visit My Son Sanctuary and go swimming in the afternoon. Da Nang beach is very pure and the scene is really beautiful. So I took many nice pictures.
And on the last day, we just walked around the town, enjoy some delicious dishes of Da Nang such as bun Quang, banh trang thit heo, etc and bought some souvenirs. I have a great gift for you. I will send your gift and the beautiful pictures that I took for you.
I really had a great time with my family. Da Nang is a wonderful place and people in here are friendly. I think this is a place I shall never forget. So how is your summer vacation? Write to me and tell me about it.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Tu Dang
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Dear Lien Ai,
I'm so glad that I can write this letter for you, so today, I willtell you some activities I have done to protect the environment.
I am a volunteer ,so i have done many things or the community service. I planted trees and beautiful flowers in the school yard. It was so great. I collected the rubbish on the beach and in the sea then I recycled them. It helps protect the environment a lot. And I, together with my friends, cleaned the street the street and lake. And I think I will also collect broken glass, can in the park, ‘cause people always throw them indiscriminately.And I prevented people prom cutting down trees, and I asked everyone to grow the forests.These are the things I have done, I think I will do more in the future.
Looking forward to seeing you
Cheers,
Linh
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I'm very happy that to tell you....
sau that là 1 mệnh đề => câu của bạn sai => sửa lại là "I'm very happy to tell you..."
câu mở đầu của bạn hơi gượng, bạn nên bỏ "somethings I like" thì đọc dễ hơn và dịch cũng dễ hơn.
with cotton basins filled (ý của bạn là gì ?, từ này có nữa sao :v)
I like canteen so much => nên chuyển thành I like the canteen (of my school) very much.
"or somethings" => "many things else"
Especial => Specially.
"help us good" => dùng từ "good" sai, mình có luôn nhận xét rằng từ "help us good....đến knowledge" bạn sử dụng chưa chính xác.
"So i really all" => thiếu động từ trong câu.
Yupp, that's all, bạn có thể tham khảo và chỉnh sửa lại bài viết, sau đó bạn post lên forum, tag tên mình or nhiều bạn chuyên Anh khác check cho lại nhé.
Chúc bạn học tốt.
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Tham khảo:
Dear Alex, I am glad to hear that both you and your family are fine. I am writing this letter to answer your questions in your recent letter which I received last week. I want to tell you about my current weather situation in my country. Because it is in summer, it is quite hot and dry now. I think that it is the early period of summer, it is not very hot and sometimes, it rains heavily. At this time of year, the best outdoor activities are swimming, playing football in the afternoon. Because of the hot weather, I prefer staying at home to going out. I am advised not to go out to take part in many outdoor activities at this time. However, swimming is one of the most interesting that I always try in summer because it gives me comfortable feelings. I have answered all your questions. I look forward to receiving the next letter from you. Best wishes, Jane.
Hi Magenta,
My family just cleaned and redecorated the house again.And,my room was also changed.I'm 11 now,so I don't like pink anymore.Knowing this,my parents happily repainted it with color blue instead of the pink color.My room looks cooler and better than ever.My red furnitures were replaced by white and blue ones.My curtains and lamp are white,the bed and the wardrope are blue...Everything look wonderful!I like my room now becaues this room now is so nice.
Dear Maureen,
I just moved into my new house in a new neighbourhood.I love everything here:My new neighbours,my new house,my new friend...But my favourite is my bedroom.I very love it!It is bigger than my old one.There are glass windows instead of the wooden ones so my room is brighter than ever. The room is sky themed:The windows are painted in nice white color.The floor is tiled with tiles of green grass,making the room look more atractive. The walls and the ceiling are in color blue.The curtains are a lovely mix between white and light blue.Also,my mom lets me decorate my room whatever I like.I love my new bedroom!
Your best friend,Vichky Kratt.