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In Viet Nam, there are a lot of many beautiful anh great places but my neighbourhood - Hoi An is the greatest place. There are many historic homes here. Each one has a different kind of colour but it's still very amazing. Especially, the foods here are absolutely delicious. That's why you should try it ! Besides, at night, the people usually light up the colourful lanterns and put them on the river. That's very incredible, it s the star is shinning in the river. However, there is only one thing I don't about my neighbourhood that the people here are sometimes quite selfish. I wish it could be more wonderful in the future. I love my neighbourhood very much. I will study better to make it becomes a better place.
My best neighbourhood is in Hoi An. There are a lot of historic homes. I it because it is large and beautiful. The food there is too delicious and my favourite food in there is banh quang. You should enjoy it! Also i love it because there are a lot of lanterns. They are lighting them on the river! But i dis it one because the people usually bossy and selfish!
I was born and live in Ha Noi. Ha Noi is a historic city which is the capital of Vietnam. It has many beautiful streets with a lot of trees. I'd to tell you some good things and some bad things about my neighbourhood.
Firstly, I love Ha Noi's beautiful scenery. I fancy walking on the lovely street which covered with dead leaves in the autumn. Reading books by the Sword Lake is one of my favourite activities. Secondly, food in Ha Noi is really good. It is famous for "Pho" and "bun cha". But I'm fascinated by "banh cuon" after all. Finally, Ha Noi has almost everything I need. You can see convenient stores, large malls,... on the street easily. Sometimes, I feel Ha Noi is a paradise. It has everything.
Beside many good things, there're always bad things at all. I detest the traffic jam in Ha Noi. It takes me about 2 hours to get home in the rush hour. It's so annoying. Not only that, but the streets are also noisy because of the sound of vehicles. Sometimes, it's driving me crazy.
I'd bell you home food and bai things about my neighbourhood . I live in ( nơi ở) .I love my neighbourhood very much because it hay many good hotel and good restaurant . The food in restaurant is very great . I dis the street because it is very noisy and crowded. That's all Thanks for your listening
I’d to tell you some good things and some bad things about living in my neibourhood. I it because it has beautiful parks, lakes, stadiums. There are many shops, restaurants, café and markets. The streets are wide and clean, there are many buildings and offices but its not very crowded and busyễ There are many puclic transportations: bus, metro, train... I dis one thing about it. The people here are not very friendly. They don't greet when they meet each other on the streets.
Mik sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cho bn Đỗ Đức Đạt nè
Không cần chữ best vì nó chứng tỏ bn có nhiều neighbourhood
Chữ there đổi thành here (nghĩa là ở đây. Vì bn đang nói về neighbourhood của bản thân mà)
Đổi câu You should enjoy it thành You should try it
Đổi cụm Also I love it because there are a lot of lanterns thành Besides I really love beauty of Hoi An at night because there are a lot of colourful lanterns.
Cái phần dis about Hoi An bn ko nên ghi những từ quá nặng thay vào đó có thể đổi selfish thành quite generous.